10 Tips If You Want To Be A Fiction Writer

By on January 27, 2016
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Many of us feel we have got a great story inside us just waiting to be told. But when it comes to putting pen to paper it can be difficult to find the right words. Being a good fiction writer is not just about having a fantastic idea for a story. It takes practice and discipline. It is easy to fall into common fiction writing traps, become clichéd and get lost and muddled along the way. Here are some tips on what to avoid and what to include if you want to be a fiction writer.

1 Start well. Avoid clichéd openings ‘it was a dark and stormy night’ etc. The beginning of your book needs to be exciting, engaging and full of action. Unless you have a truly unusual way to describe the weather, maybe avoid making this your opening line.

2 Stick to "said" to carry dialogue. Even though you may be desperate to explain to the reader that the character is angry, sad or overjoyed if you use anything other then “said” it actually distracts from the dialogue which should convey the emotion you are trying to portray itself, without having to point it out to the reader. By using ‘spluttered’ ‘shouted’ ‘gasped’ or ‘angrily’ ‘sadly’ ‘happily’ you are telling the reader rather than showing, which makes for clumsy, cluttered prose.

3 Don’t over exclaim!!!!!

While punctuation can be used cleverly and properly to enhance a story, overuse of exclamation marks can be hugely distracting and cause great annoyance to your reader. Keep these under control, and definitely don’t use more than one in a row!

4 Avoid accents

Unless you can write them exceptionally well. Remember you want your reader to be able to read your story, not have to go over words and sentences several times to make sense of them. If you want to use accents or regional dialects then do it sparingly, dropping a few choice words in here any there to give a flavour of an accent without ruining the flow of the words on the page.

5 Don’t overwrite

All fiction writers are likely to have been guilty of this at one time or another. Try to carefully select words and make each one of them count and work to enhance your story. Stuffing the page with hugely detailed paragraphs that describe every single thing to within an inch of its life simply demonstrates a lack of skill and brings the story to a standstill as a result.

6 Read it out loud

If you aren’t sure how well your story flows, try reading it aloud. This is often the quickest way to finding out whether it is working or not. If your prose sounds clunky and stunted, go back and try again.

7 Don’t overthink

If you put too much pressure on yourself, the likelihood is that you’ll scare yourself into such a state you won’t be able to write anything at all. When you write first drafts try to remember that’s exactly what they are -first drafts. They don’t need to be perfect so let yourself get the story down and then work at it until it’s right.

8 Get opinions

It is hard to look at your book completely objectively - this is understandable, after all - you wrote it. Whether you get a tingling excitement because you think it might be quite good, or you have read it so many times it barely seems like a story at all, either way getting a second, third, fourth (as many as possible really) opinion from someone who isn’t afraid to tell you the truth is always a good idea.

9 Be kind to yourself

It’s easy to feel disheartened as a fiction writer. There are so many obstacles to climb during the writing process, and if you are in the minority who actually finish a piece of fiction, knowing what to do with it becomes a whole other problem. Give yourself a break and remind yourself that you are not alone - most other writers have felt pretty bleak at one time or another too!

10 Finish before you want to stop

No matter how into your writing you are, end the day before you run out of things to say. If you stop yourself while you are still immersed in your writing, when you come back to it you will immediately have something to get you going rather then struggling to know where to begin.

Being a fiction writer is no walk in the park, and being a good one even more of a challenge. However through learning and practice, perseverance, determination and perhaps just a little bit of luck, you’ll get there, no matter how long it takes.

About Bethany Cadman

Bethany Cadman is an author and freelance writer. Her highly anticipated debut novel 'Doctor Vanilla's Sunflowers' is available on Amazon as both an eBook and a paperback. You can find it here - http://tinyurl.com/z47t8qf

2 Comments

  1. Jane Holmes

    March 19, 2016 at 2:05 am

    Your blogs are great. I’ve self published two mysteries and can look back now and see that there’s a lot of room for improvement, I’ve learned so much since these first two books.,I know my third one is sooo much better. Yet, there is always more to learn. Your blog puts food for thought right up in front of me – points to consider and think through with every book I write. Thanks for this pose words of wisdom.

    Jane

  2. Myrna

    March 24, 2016 at 8:58 pm

    Hi. Grandma Moses was in her righties when she began her paintings. I am 75. Thought I’d best get to it. Please send any & all free help that is available . I am not imying that ‘i’m Grand Moses, but I am a grandma, I do know there is a story I want to give to a reading audience. My brain is quite annoyed with me for putting this off for so long. I tried to tell my brain that I have journals & have been practicing writing all my life. My brain merely snorted, “Not good enough!” My brain has become my mental terrorist & has taken me hostage until I get down to the serious business of writing. It stays awake & dulls most of night, flooding my emotions with memories. I am drowning in my own attic. Throw me a writer’s life-line, a mental life preserver. My eye faucets are leaky, my memories are trickling from my mouth in dripping sarcasm. Help please.

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