Past Or Present Tense – The Pro’s and Cons

By on December 18, 2015
Past Or Present Tense - The Pro's and Cons - Writer's Life.org

When creating any new piece of writing, selecting the tense in which to write is often something an author struggles with. Not long ago writing in the past tense was strongly favoured, and particularly with works of fiction it was very rare to find a novel written in the present tense.

In recent years however this has changed, and we have seen a shift to the present tense, with some writers believing that writing using the past tense makes the work itself seem old fashioned.

What has made the past tense increasingly unpopular, and the present tense now the tense of choice?

It seems for most seasoned writers it is an instinctive and natural decision. However for many novice writers, this is just another choice to fret over. So it is important to understand what the advantages and disadvantages of each might be. Here we have broken these down so authors can make an informed choice when deciding which tense to write in.

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THE PRESENT TENSE - the pro’s

Present tense creates immediacy in a way that the past tense cannot, it allows the reader to experience changes in the story and changes to its characters as they happen. This creates a bond between the reader and characters as they experience things together, simultaneously, therefore tension, suspense and drama can be more easily conveyed. Characters become more lifelike, tangible and real, and selecting the present tense when describing a character truly reflects their nature, drawing the reader closer to them.

The use of the present tense also reflects the overall theme of the book. If your book tells a story of events that happened to your main character in the past, but he or she tells them in the present tense, the effect can be very powerful. Simply by telling the events in this way, the author is hinting at a past that is very much part of the narrators present, and perhaps will always be so.


Using the present tense in your work also simplifies how we use the other tenses in the story. When writing in the past tense, it is likely that a writer will dip in and out of the other 12 tenses that we use in the English language. However using the present tense restricts our use of the others, with the majority of stories written in the present tense only using the simple present, the present progressive, and occasionally the simple past and simple future. Even then the majority of the writing is likely to be kept in the simple present. This simplicity can be used cleverly to the writers advantage, conveying clear ideas and allowing the reader to fully immerse themselves in the story, with no confusion about when the events took place.

PRESENT TENSE - the con’s

If employing the present tense in our writing we become restricted with how we can describe time. Trying to manipulate a sequence of events or change the chronological order will be difficult and potentially confusing to the reader. The point of the present tense is to tell a series of events as they unfold. If you don’t want to evoke the feeling that what you are writing is happening 'now', then the present tense is not a good choice.

Building multi-layered characters is more of a challenge if you use the present tense. Because you can no longer influence the order of events or the duration, it is difficult to put across the characters own personal experience of time, how they understand the past, and how it has influenced them. The more context we have for a character, the more we are able to understand them, and their motivations for why they are a certain way now. Without the kind of context flashbacks into the past give the reader, there is a risk of the characters coming across as tediously uncomplicated.

Suspense is harder to convey with a story written in the present tense. The protagonists of a present tense story don’t have any idea what is going to happen to them from one moment to the next, and subsequently, neither does the reader. Tension and suspense come from having that knowledge, knowing that something is about to happen, whether the protagonist is aware of it or not.

Finally, if we are not careful, use of the present tense can cause us to be sloppy. While the past tense allows us to write selectively, and only include, necessary, plot advancing details in the work. Using the present tense more naturally encourages inclusion of mundane, irrelevant details, because such events would happen in a natural sequence of time.

Before beginning any work it is worth thinking about which tense will best suit your story. Each have their own advantages which, if used cleverly, could enhance your work. Whatever you do, make sure you pick wisely as it is certainly not an easy job to go back and change when you are half way through!

Bethany Cadman -contributor

Bethany Cadman -contributor

About Bethany Cadman

Bethany Cadman is an author and freelance writer. Her highly anticipated debut novel 'Doctor Vanilla's Sunflowers' is available on Amazon as both an eBook and a paperback. You can find it here - http://tinyurl.com/z47t8qf

6 Comments

  1. Sonni Quick

    February 5, 2016 at 11:28 am

    I’ve been writing my first book. Non fiction, but I have to fictionalize at times using knowledge I know about his life.I’m writing about a man currently in prison, using his letters. I started writing in past tense but changed to first person so I could write as if he was thinking his letters. It’s been quite a challenge.

  2. james jetton,jr

    February 5, 2016 at 8:08 pm

    Bethany, Your exposition of tenses including production of suspense elevates me into sensing I am able. Thx. James Jetton

  3. Kehinde A. Bolutife

    February 7, 2016 at 3:07 pm

    This is quite helpful!
    Thanks!

  4. Micki Peluso

    February 8, 2016 at 8:29 pm

    I do my best writing in present tense in slice of life funny stories because I can bring the reader into the story with me and experience it. Many of my readers mention this in reviews but don’t realize it’s the present tense. Plus you can avoid so many passive verbs. My one book, a memoir uses both tenses to tell my story, beginning in the present and then flashing back to the past. Since it is about a tragedy, I use the past funny events leading up to the present in which I end the story. This way neither sorrow or laughter is overdone and keeps my readers in the book with my family throughout.

    Sigh, wish I could write a novel.

    Micki Peluso

  5. Ybz

    May 12, 2016 at 10:53 pm

    Gosh, but most of the time, the headache goes to the editor not to the writer.

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