How To Write Emotional Death Scenes

By on September 19, 2019

Let's admit it when it comes to killing off our characters; many writers struggle. But as readers, well, we all love a good death scene, don't we?

It can be difficult for any writer to kill an important character or even any character for that matter. But the critical thing to remember is that if you are going to do it, you sure as hell need to make it count.

If a reader simply glosses over your character's death without even so much as the blink of an eye, then you are going severely wrong. Even if the character whose end you bring about is one that your readers love to hate, they still need to FEEL something about it, and so the ability to write an emotional death scene is crucial.

So what are some helpful tips for doing just that?

Make your readers care about the character

Of course, if you want your readers to be affected by the death, you need them to care. If your readers are emotionally invested in the character, if they want them to live, then the end should crush them, make them cry, leave a big fat hole in their hearts. Killing off a character who you've allowed your audience to adore can be cruel, but it's also very powerful too!

Make your readers loathe the character

Everyone loves to see the untimely demise of a character they hate. So when its time for your hero to rise above, and your villain to finally be obliterated, it's vital that your reader feels that same sense of relief and even jubilation that the reign of terror is finally over!

Make sure the death affects the remaining characters

Of course, let's not forget that there are still characters left in your story (hopefully) and if you want to ensure your death scene makes an impact, the reader needs to learn about what kind of effect it has had on the other characters, and how the story changes because of it. If this doesn't happen, we've got to wonder what the point of killing the character off in the first place was?

Avoid cliches like the plague (haha)

Stereotypes and cliches have no place in magnificent death scenes, so try to make sure you avoid them. Otherwise, your reader will find it difficult to feel deeply affected. Focus on being wonderfully unique and fill your death scene with arresting images and carefully crafted action to ensure your readers stay hooked until the very last breath.

Be unpredictable

Of course, a death that readers see coming from a mile away is never as exciting as one that shocks them to their very core. So don't be afraid to take risks in your death scenes and your choice of characters to kill. Your readers may be left reeling, but it certainly makes for an entertaining story!

By using the above tips, you can make sure that your death scenes are richly emotional and full of drama, tension, and are truly riveting. So whether your reader is relieved, overjoyed, or utterly devastated, you know that your death scene has had the intended effect.

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About Bethany Cadman

Bethany Cadman is an author and freelance writer. Her highly anticipated debut novel 'Doctor Vanilla's Sunflowers' is available on Amazon as both an eBook and a paperback. You can find it here - http://tinyurl.com/z47t8qf

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